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Flash in the Pan (Again)


The slamming would not stop, every few minutes they would slam something down on the floor.

Did they not know they were on the second floor?

Boom! Bang! Slam! It was more than they could take.

Running up the stairs they kicked in the door. There was no one in sight, they stood in stunned silence.

Then they felt it, the shaking. The building collapsed, debris blocking out the light.

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